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empty cathedrals
echo
with hints of a time long gone as
quiet prayers di
s
appear
swallowed up by 
a borrowed past

free me from myself
lend me your
life
so i can
live
again

your heart beats
hummingbird patterns
across
skin and bone

i love you
just 
a little,
don't tell anyone
dear,
it's our secret.
[link]

inspired by that, and by the fic i'm writing right now. <3
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RipVanWinkle316 Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why is this so good.

OH
because you wrote it.
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SolarumNyx Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
to be honest, i really have no idea why this piece has gotten as many faves as it has, i felt it was one of my weaker writings.
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RipVanWinkle316 Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Really? Interesting..
I feel like it flows really well. I enjoy reading your poems because the way you write them, the way you format them, makes them fall into place. Honestly, that's the best way I can describe it. The words just fall into place in my mind. I read at a certain rhythm, but that rhythm changes depending on which poem of yours I'm reading, see. Your poems make me want to write.
Mostly, because your writing makes me realize how beautiful and bare poetry can be. And I don't mean bare as in boring, I mean bare as in real. Feelings are laid out. A person is stripped bare of defenses when one writes as you do.
I don't know how to explain it. I love your writing style. Maybe someday, I'll paint quotes from your poems up on my walls and show the pictures to you.
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SolarumNyx Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
really, my writing isn't the ones you should be putting up - there are plenty more talented people out there! :iconcraiplz:
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RipVanWinkle316 Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No, yours is. Your work is less well known but just as deserving. Your stuff is good - stop putting yourself down and trust me! c:
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SolarumNyx Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconcryforeverplz: ok
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:iconbrokenfragilethings:
this is beautiful stAHP

"I love you
just
a little"

IS REALLY CUTE FVYIGRUHEJDN DYING ABOUT IT

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SolarumNyx Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
whAT IT I IM YOU

:iconidekplz:
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:iconbrokenfragilethings:
IT'S JUST PERF YOUR WRITING IS PERF
YOU ARE PERF

would you mind if i used that sort of as a prompt? IF THAT'S COOL HOMIE
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SolarumNyx Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
imalsdkfjlakjfa lajfg;a

GO AHEAD MANNN <3
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