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and i wish

from the bottom of my

rained-on

broken down

pitter

pattering

heart

that i'll find

someone

that i hate

more than myself.
still can't free verse.

still fun though.
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insomniaplague Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Garh, why is your poetry so good!? You can do free verse; I reassure you. :heart:
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infinitexxx Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
simple, powerful.
i really love how this is put together :heart:
and how it kind of is just how i feel <3
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SolarumNyx Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i think everyone feels like this at times. <3
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travelgirlxx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
Free verse comes in time ;)

When I was your age, I was certain I'd never write a poem I'd let anyone else read! (bahahahaha - I was wrong!!!)

Lovely poem, dear!
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SolarumNyx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i've been told that a lot, and it's one of the main reasons i do post my writing up here, haha. i'd love to have a collection of my past writings so i can see the improvement.

and maybe laugh at myself in shame when i'm older. xD

but thank you so much! and wow, i really love your writing as well.

:iconluvluvplz:
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travelgirlxx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
Awwww :blush: And yes, it's nice to look back on the old stuff!! ;)
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SolarumNyx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yep!

but wow, reading my old mary-sue laden monstrosities make me cringe quite a bit.
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travelgirlxx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
Hehehe. Sometimes, the cringing is a good thing!
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SolarumNyx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconcryforeverplz:
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travelgirlxx Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
Hehe :love:
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