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chlorine burns in her mechanical lungs
rust -
iron oxide and mars
roman god of war
launching javelins
straight to her
bare ly - beat ing
heart

marching to the
fa
  ding
       sounds

              of a
                     cav
                          alry drum

salty whispers fade on her skin, her
screams drowned out by the
burn
of despair and
im
  possible

expectations

she sinks

d
e
e
p
e
r

into the illusion of s a n i t y
screaming broken pleas of
save me save me saveme saveme savemesavemesa-

she was never good at swimming--
the words don't flow as well as they used to.

life's been tough lately.
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tubefed Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow...that was gorgeous. There was something almost painful about reading it--just your choice of words seemed to clang together. Lovely work, m'dear.

And that last line...God, it just brings everything together!
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SolarumNyx Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh wow, thank you so much. to be honest, this was more of a spur of the moment thing, so i'm glad someone enjoyed it. ^^
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tubefed Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, your moments are quite impressive. XD And dear, I reassure you I'm not the only one who enjoyed it.
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